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-gets out gun-



Yeah?
Well I have a bullet with your name on it..

&& the noise of you hitting the floor can be your suicide note..

Fuck you..
I'm not listening anymore..

You took two moments from my life..
Now i'm taking your life as return..

Unfair trade?
Perphaps..
But the scars you left me with, will portray the pain I'll feel forever more..

I'm just freeing you from that burdan..
No need to thank me.. I'm too modest for that.

What's this crying?
What's this screaming?

you taught me that these pittyful actions should be left unheard..
you gave me tough love..
i'm giving you tough hate.

Ignoring all my symptons of pain..
Just told me that I should never forgive you..

&& now i shall leave you.
Leave your empty corspe..

With my bullet pierced in your mind..
indeed.. ironic much?
You crossed me off you list of life..
&& now I'll permantly be encased in your soul.

..the words 'don't forget me' are finally put forward..

&& yes.. i'll always love you.. <|3
©2007-2009 ~DorkIsBroken
:icondorkisbroken:

Author's Comments

OLD.
gosh..


lol; i'm ashamed at how emo it is..
i kinda hate the ending bit.
but; i'll keep.
gotta keep some history of my writing. ^^.

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:iconmcwhitey:
hypocrit first you say you love him then you hate him make up your mind other wise it's a good poem

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"Even i get boarded sometimes do you think i had much of a choice?"-Han Solo
:icondorkisbroken:
Who says poems need a definate message?
I'm writing out my emotions in twisted phrases..
Do my feelings have to be certain?
=] xxx

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cor. ;]
:iconjaraiya-on-crack:
Mc's just retarded...(kidding, Rob, don't get upset...or p'd off)...it has a message of confusion behind it...like your questioning yours as well as the other's actions...it is good...pretty good...

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I reject your reality and substitute "=)" my own!!!!!!!
"Don't move...I think I just failed a spot check."
"Roll to see if you see that giant spider ahead!"
Du bist kaum eine Person.
~AdvertiseYou, ~WritersClub
:iconmcwhitey:
first of all why are you butting in on our conversation and if you want to talk to her do it when im not talking to her.

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"Even i get boarded sometimes do you think i had much of a choice?"-Han Solo
:iconmcwhitey:
no i never said they did it's just i was confused about how you felt you cant love and hate someone at the same time.

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"Even i get boarded sometimes do you think i had much of a choice?"-Han Solo
:icondorkisbroken:
Indeed. I do..
It's like a rolla-coster, one minute we're back to being best friends..
next moment I want him to just dissappear..
Suckage eh? xxx

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cor. ;]
:icondorkisbroken:
Okeyy.. Reply this first..
Thanks, I'm glad you like..
And it's true, I'm telling myself as much as I'm telling him I hate him..
either way, I love him..
&& thanks.. <3

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cor. ;]
:icondorkisbroken:
&&.. feel free to talk to me with him..
I'm an awfully talkative person...
&& would love the interaction =]
xxxxxx

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cor. ;]
:iconmcwhitey:
i do tlk to you itz just ive been buisey with creati9ng some clubz and such and puting in some new material and finals and oh the list goes on and on. so yeah i will talk it'll just take a little.
anyway how are you oh and you should join my two new clubz
and :STRWRS-FC: they're cool hip and happinin.
all you have to do is anser the Q&A and your in...

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"Even i get boarded sometimes do you think i had much of a choice?"-Han Solo

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